Nows the time for me to start working. The cv/resume is looking like a background check, the grammar is rough and the experience is… typical. Garrulous is some sections; if not all parts.
While I make revisions to the document can I be given pointers by anyone willing to endorse a strangers words with critique? e.g
Shorten the document. Why? The world moves at such an extraordinary pace these days that everything has to be extremely rudimentary.
Make it easier to digest. Why? To give people a good idea of what I can do.
Make the experience more relevant. How? Instead of writing a paragraph under each segment, write a few bullet points; one with tasks and another with achievements while I was there.
@Logan, thanks. *Opening the snippets in another tab helps…